Yea man you came way too basic.....I mean.....If you look at his picture you might get the wrong impression...but.....meh.....check it....you had personals but they were weak and at times even played.....parts of your verse are stretched your trying to say to much dog....throw a quick jab and be out....its not a story of how much the kid sux its witty commentary on why your better.....and why he suxs...you tried to pack to much in if you would have shortened your lines....come with harder more personal...like embarrasing material and clearly stated your points you would've taken it.....keep battlin with this knowledge and you will elevate.........pz love for the fam