van

KLO! take that L out and that's how it'll go..
Just one punch from me and I'll get a nice KO..
first line was good..2nd basically same thing
I don't know this kid, but I know he's new..
Easly explained, from day one it was threw..
not really a punch
Tryed to make your flows neon to make them glow..
Made a damn of words thats made to stem a flow..
not really a direct punch in the 2nd line..
Lookin at you like a semi auto-matic weapon, not spittin fast..
Come threw like speed racer, I see you just sittin gettin past..
decent punch...not bad
Your like a woman that wipes wrong, your clit stinks bad..
Next thing you know your fans are gone, like pinks fad..
lol..good punch
You tryin to spit like a gun fight at the OK Coralle..
The clock hits high noon, that's the end of your profile..
ok closer to finish it


KLO

It's the K to the L to the O to the exclamation point.
My punctuation gets applause while your sentences dissapoint.
just a so-so opening..1st line was lame and no punch..2nd was just a basic punch
You could write a whole novel and only get bad reviews
while what I wrote on my shopping list could make the evening news.
punch was decent..i liked the idea
Don't fuck with me, I'm like a dog that's been abused;
I'll piss all over your house, your clothing, and your CDs too.
not feelin it..koncept wasnt good and punch wasnt either
If my rhymes are Jesus Christ, then yours are Brittney Spears;
They'll devote whole days to me while you'll be dated in years.
another not direct punch and basic too
Even if you went back in time and killed me before I dropped this verse
I'd still murder your ass 'cause your battling skills are the worst.
another basic concept and meh punch


vote - Van..i didnt feel KLO's verse.. vans punches were harder and more complex, KLO didnt come very hard and alot of his verse was basic and not a direct punch which wasnt hard hitting

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