Father
Your opener was horrible..
After that it got slightly better but just..slightly.
You had some ok wordplay, but tried to point it out to much..
Some didnt really work well..
Also some of ur attempts at personals? no..
You had some ok punches & thats it, basically.
Expected much more from somewhere with such an loose jaw.
..Overall ok.

Dazasta
Started of pretty good, but got slightly worse..
What basically did it for you, where the comedic punches..
The funny lines that just made more of an impact, then
Fathers attempts at personals..
Overall u just had the slightly better verse..
& im pointin out punches as the main factor for my vote,
I felt you had the upper hand in them..
& since this is a battle, u get my vote.

Dazasta