Mentality - you had really bad flow, when u started off your lines were really stretched, and then u even had some lines that went on to a 2nd line..then towards the end the lines shortened which was better but the front still was horrible. but then on the other hand, your punches werent that bad, infact alot were good. you had some decent word play, and ya verse wasnt that basic...metas were just ok though.

Flash, u didnt come very hard..alot of ya concepts were basic and the punches u laid out could have been much better..you coulda reworded alot of em and made them more complex and increased how hard they hit. add metas and personals to them, and try to make ya concepts less basic..work on ya set up of ya punches too. at the start.. your first bar was packed wit multis........yea....they mean shit, try to replace all of them wit punches, thats whats important. also..to add..ya first bar was stretched, each line took up 2 lines...and thats stretched to hell! when u changed up ya struct, ya flow was better then u changed it again and it was still ok but wasnt as consistent...so basically, u need to work on the keys of battling...punches and flow/struct. it took away from ya verse alot not having those...cuz basically thats everything

overall - flash's verse was simple and not hard hitting, he lacked in everything. mentality took this battle wit harder punches, better wordplay, and a more complex verse overall

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