nuj let me tell you like this kid, that kind of verse would work good
in a real life battle cause you gotta have alot to say...but on the
net... i guess "you have to make harder punches" just shorten your
bars up a lil bit though...thats about it, oh and make bars same lenght..
and say shit nobody would ever think about saying

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