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Old 02-03-04, 10:24 PM   #2
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this is why you make the big bucks.

yet another great piece from the G Hoodian Gramatical Gargantuan.
You had solid imagery, strong writers voice, and really good flow. It's nice to see that you've abandoned the even bar style that i cling to so hopelessly. Along with all the goodness of this piece....there was a message. What the fuck is up with that? piece don't have messages anymore, man, get with the times. I wanna see more about the ice and hunnies!

Quote:
Thinking on the run,
I neither condone nor applaud it
For I surrounded myself in shelter;
that is, alone in the closet. .


but in the closet, you get to sit on the newly washed towels and dwell on your thoughts, no?
Greak work dood =)
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