Father - You didnt start off to strong. After that it got alittle bit better, but not much. You had some decent wordplay, but trying to point it out didnt help it at all. you tried to include personals but they werent really hitting. You had some ok punches, some basic but some werent bad, decent overall i say. i think you should change your name..cuz u aint RB's father quite yet.

Dazasta - Started of pretty good, stayed consistent through out mostly, wit gettin worse towards the very end. you had some very good punches..adding comedy into them made them much more wittier and more fun to read. You had a good verse basically overall..u stayed smooth through out


V/ Dazasta...his punches were much harder and more wittier..he had a overall better verse to boot

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