I like the opening, a little short, and it needs tightened up a bit, but good.

"Fuck their decent tendencies, I'm feasting on enemies
Each one of them that mentioned me, Fill em up with amphetamines
Kill em I'm done with them, What's the recipe??"

Ouch, that could be a killer, but it feels like something is missing, maybe some direction, channel that anger, if it was a battle line i'm sure you could eat some one with that.

"Operations uncovering weapon smuggling thugs
That was suspposed to be muscled by hustling drugs"

I like the word play, the "s"'s they just flow. It helps me to hear the beat you have in your head.
I agree with the other people that you need to even up a few of the bars, but they must not understand the idea of transition in song,... flippin the beat and killin it.


"Like Who the fuck is gonna be, There when the lights are out
I'm like noone come and see what's it's like now
I'm putting the mic down, Crying everytime I write now"

You really lose the beat here, but the emotion keeps it on the page.

You're closing was alright, but extend extend extend.