Like Stabbing A Corpse- In A Hearse- Your Verse Defiantly Ain't Bringing Pain
Spitten So Hard I'm Leaving Flow Stains- It's Just Insane When I Taint Your- Membrane
^multis....good first line....bad second line.....
Your Lines Are Horrible, Especially When You Try To Pick Up The Phone
Anytime You Try To Call Yourself A Mc, All I Hear Is The Dial Tone
^this is ok wordplay but its been done....played bar......
Your Joint Is Pointless Like " Dull Butter Knives, Fuck? I Hang Your Rhymes
I'm Like A Clumsy Drug Dealer The Way Drop Dope Lines
^again this played come with new shit that sux...its better tahn played...
Emcees Sleep On Your Battles, Cause You Be Dropping Stories Like It Was Bed-Time
^and you switched your rhyme scheme up..this was a ok punch...
Glass-Knuckle Boxing, Spitting So Fast, My Saliva Turns Into Toxin
My Lyrics Are So "Ill" You Couldn't Step To It Without A Vaccination
Extend Your Arm Towards Me And Observe Your Amputation
^this was some good concepts but really just alot of filler one ok meta4.......
If U Was The Sun U Still Couldn’t Shine Against Me, Cuz I’m Similar To A Sunshade
You Fear My Comeback Cause It's Like A Boomerang Made Of Razor Bladez
^eheh there ya go good meta4....nice punch.....good stuff...


Im sitting here laughin mah ass off....at da wack ass verse above^^
You dun blong here..cuz da punches im throwin aint of "brotherly love"
^meh this is an Ok opener.......its not the greatest.....
You're lost in ya flow..like da Blair Witch Project- u goin round n round
Your rhymes are useless...like some of the things i find at da lost n found
^LOL at you this is a terrible bar....dude no never again..ever...
Like a Charmin napkin.....dis bitches' verse is cuddly and very soft...
The instant i saw his crooked-structed verse...mah spirits went aloft...
^word good personal nice vocab.....good bar....
Dats flash in mah sig...dodging all the bullets n' punches i b throwing..
Just cuz u lost dis battle badly..dun give up...just keep on going....
^No bad punch.....sorry thats clearly homer simpson.......
KiLlEr killed anoda mc.-Paramedics chekin if "Flash' still alive....
He in da hospital- parents cryin'- ....1% chance of Flash 2 survive....
^this is an OK punch alot of filler in your verse though man....gotta go with flash y'all return the favor....pz....
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