James: i was feelin the first 3 lines, if you would've kept it up i'd be sreaming murder.

Bretheren: line one was clean, too nice... the second two what are you thinking? i realize act rhymes with dendropheliac, but c'mon.

James: lines 6-10 i'm lovin em they flow well and they hit hard too

Bretheren:"Rearrange your name, and get a 'mesaj' about this kid bruising himself,
Like this kid was battling himself in the mirror, you're losing yaself,
You asking to die battling me, just stick an axe in your thigh,
You ain't an ass-pirate, then why you got a patch in ya eye?," Yeah they ryhme... and


James:"This bitch is thin.... and brittle" NO, no, no, expunge this line from your mind, you didn't need a filler that bad.

Bretheren:"Ohio?! Alien abducted ass live on a farm, why don't you just offer them crops?," LMAO that's great.

James: closer was ok nothing spectacular, but it worked well

Bretheren: That's how you end it?

It's almost a toss up, if Bretheren had a closer that did something... anything, he'd have it, but i give this to JamesJr. Good job, work on the word play.