This was a really serious peice. And even though it ended on a serious note, I couldn't help but crack a smile at the end. Just thought it was cool and just a bit humorous.

I think, wether you did it on purpose or not, the fact that you went without capitilization actually worked. It actually stood out and seemed to mean something. I like this stuff you're writing, great job.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.