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Old 02-03-04, 11:56 PM   #6
Ven0m
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Flow:Puert had better flow, Mario your flow was ok but your verse was too basic u need to work on that

Punches:Puert had more hard hittin punches like I said Mario ur shit was too basic..what i think is that ur just looking for a whole clutter of words too rhyme together...Puert had the better wordplay and punches in this battle

Structure:Tie, Both of your structures were fucked up..uneven..short lines too long lines..u guyz need to elevate on that

Vocabulary:Puert had the better vocab, and he used it well in the lines that he spat..mario's vocab was way too basic and should be rearranged...

overall:Puert took this battle hands down he came out with wittier punches and mario verse was wack..you guyz need to elevate on some shit...Puert u got my vote