hmm...good battle.....close.....let's see...
Dope: structure was very good....metas were average.....wordplay too....
punches were ehh....wasnt really feelin too many of them.... work on combinin ur punches and personals, u attempted a few....good multies...you should keep your verse all together..no spaces between bars.....overall not a bad verse at all....i'd say 12/20 punches need to get better...

Venom: also very good strcuture....liked your punches...definitley better....more direct....made me laugh....no multies really....good attempts at personals....wordplay good....meats nice....overall good verse...i'd say 14/20 .....

good battle dope you just gotta elevate your punches...potential have you...
venom good battle use multies sometimes there fun....
vote-venom

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