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Old 02-04-04, 01:08 AM   #28
Ambitious
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great battle in my opinion.....
meters had a different type structure...like it
Virt : structure ... kinda stretched....loose the quotes! wordplay was good liked it...
punches were ok...decent....metas were dope...added some good trys at personals with ur punches....good job on that...your flow was a little off...at points....good verse tho....15/20

Meters: structure....tho looked weird....it made ya verse flow very nice...and your punches and personals connected real good....also witty...as was the wordplay here ans there....metas were interesting...cool.....overall a good verse....punches hit hard and direct......17/20

virt just work on elevating you'll get there.....please loose the quotes...fucks up flow and strucutre sometimes!!

vote - meters....nice battle

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