Rare One
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IP:
Yo who is this pretty pink pussy wearing a damn thong?
You wan't proof? This fruitcake's gots quotes for cam'ron
ok operm nice personal shot, metaphor coulda been better
This fuck gets hit with damn rocks & cut like lamb chops
And Wise'll drop Technician way faster than scam stocks
nice follow through, although i though you were lacking on your punch
Ya mixed up..
filler
Twisted like u either a herb or a n00b but couldn't choose
Punches leave u helpless like superman w/out a phone booth
nice set, althoguh the follow through is a little play, heard it before. nice punch
Kids into incest..
& yeah..I Know for a fact..but lets see what his mom say
Oh wait..She ain't gonna say shit..she was his prom date!
alright connection with your lines, the punch wasnt much seemed sort of generic
Ya elevation's funny!....
Tha shit took a downfall..I'm higher than u..& u on cloud 420
decent personal spin off. punch was alright
Really lightweight..cuz I ate him in seconds,wasn't even hungry
U nothing...
flow fell off. Punch needed more i thought
Accepting tha callout?better think it through..ya king of fools
T's got no use..This Technician dosen't even have any tools
alright personal with the follow through, punch could have used more i thought
Over all you had a nice verse, alright rhyme scheme flow was ok. punchs could have used a little more but you have some nice ones in there. Liked your opener, but thought over all your metaphors needed some work.
We collabed... over aim the keys straight banged it out ....
& now that shit's up... you do nothin' but drag it down!
nice personal, good metaphor
Shit son... now i might look bad... it's all thanks to this ....
Wisdom?... kids punches are sad... surprised LLL sanctioned you!
working personals, but i thought your punch could have hit a little more
Wise Ways...climbs for days..still cant reach where Tech finds his place ...
Rewind his taste ...find his pace... so whack his rhymes beyond Third Base!
Nice bar i thought, had everything, metaphor was good, punch was good
Doesn't show is location... even the hometown's ashamed of this cat ...
Name in Wits End roatation?...did lots of ass kissing b4 they gave him that!
LoL good bar, dope personal
We battled kinda recent... so I thought that you'd drop a 1/4 of heat shit ....
But the only time you acheive it...involves some toilet water and feces!
nice ending although i thought your metaphor was played
over all your verse was alright, good punchs alot of personals i thought. Your metphors werent bad and your flow was alright although could have been better.
Vote- Technician
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