wise ways
you had that ill personal, about his prom date, tht made me laugh. other than that you didin't have any really strong, hard hitting punches like i would of expected you to, structure was a lil of an metas were ok.

technician
you had a few nice personals, an nearly every one of your punches hit, you didn't ome as strong as i thought, wordplay was ok, an metas were good. nice battle.


vote- tech
better verse, more hardhitinng punhes!!


plz try an drop an honest vote obn the battles in my sig, 1 or either, thnks

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