yea a very nice spit.:freeman:. its nice to see people doing somthing different on here insted of the same borin shit. I thought the vocab was good in this peice and also the flow of it. like i sed on the other op your style i like a lot, it newish. topic was the best thing for me tho, really liked how ya broght it across. only ya 2nd op and already makein waves. keep it up. 8/9 out of 10

fave line = As my alterative to sleep.. Im writing
The shadows of my face...
... Lit up by the dim lighting
Pre-occupied mind..