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Old 02-04-04, 05:23 AM   #10
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Nice battle here but I expected a lot more
wittiness from both..Iunno why but I did
Iight

Jacent--> your punches were nice short and snappy but there was a lot
of yawning filler. they easily affected your verse in the end
but overall your verse was iight and your opening bar was funny
that was witty and jus made me chuckle

Allegory--> again your verse was funny, not amazingly hard
but i dint see the usual conformity to witty punching here
your punches in places were original, the Captains Briefs line
made me laff ma head off..dunny why but i jus kept on laffin

in the end, not a bad battle..jus needed more hard punches

V/Allegory

pz
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