outcome took this battle easily..unknown your verse was very basic and weak, you had no real structure or flow and you didn't even use a single punch or personal..look at some other verses to get ideas to help you elevate. outcome, you had some creative wordplay and punches, a normal structure and flow so you get my vote on this battle........

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