Well you got slept on so I give you an quick honest opinion
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(Hopefully that isn't why you call yourself "Solitude")
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First yeah I agree with need a (better) intro:
I dunno really, HONESTLY brutally
You need to up it all and read some tutorials on this site
You had some decent multies
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Try lengthening the bars adding more vocab wordplay etc
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JamesJr.
Like I said
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read some tutorials on this site
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