Flyweight
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IP:
Timeless:
Punch Lines:6/10
Structure:8/10
Vocab:5/10
Flow:8.5/10
Sylicon:
Punches:3/10 (it rhymed nice but was no real punch)
Structure:4/10 (try lengthening it)
Vocab:6.5/10
Flow:7/10
I have to say my "personal vote" goes to Timeless
Both had STRONG points!!! Work on them as well as weakness
JamesJr.
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