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Old 02-04-04, 09:41 AM   #15
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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cutastraphe
you 0-3 that's a shame, i even got more losses
you aint even got a win yet, you kno wuts more worthless
didnt even ryhme? 3/10

i could use the force, but i don't need shit to dead you
and tell fantazee, you can't get that bitch to have sex with you
prety weak man, 4/10

your a waste of trash, but still i'll throw you out
a ghostly image it takes one breath to blow you out
nice play on his name, 6/10

sorry to dissapoint, your bars are wut did it
so choppy and messed up, it looks like a sars exibit
nice idea, bad wordplay, 5/10

u startin with the man, so be ready to book
cutastraphe ghost and my machete are hooked
bad closer, 4/10

pretty weak verse man, i know you can come harder than this

overall 22/50


ghostie
lovein the college pussy, so it was a nice suprise u pre-med
ya words, a pre-cog against a 0-3 head thats already dead
wasn't really feelin this, not too bad 5/10

said u didnt have time but howm i supposed to know when ur
constantly on invisible mode, too slow to comprehend my birds?
wtf, a wack non ryhming punch, 3/10

here have another,flipin more words then ggw camera and girls shirts
cut never had a full 10 so hes lost for anything close s unfamilliar turf
again pretty wack, 4/10

apparently as i tryed turnin the outcome on u, found ya face doom[peepavatar]
i cut him the face, ast him rap he? gushed red handed, rep ruined
played, i seen the doom punch before used on him, 5/10

Ghostie instill in mc my realness, be that a factor when you hearing sets of booing
im tryna book u in the system of the best, but found out ur just documental movies
why does most of your verse not ryhme, 3/10

make yor shit ryhme, comprhenable, an fix your structure.

overall 22/50


my vote cut
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