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Old 02-04-04, 09:51 AM   #5
Timeless
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this was a really good spit, you had the flow down to a tea. the flow worked well through out the piece. 9/10 structure was also good and stayed constant without flaw 9/10 vocab was very good and i enjoyed reading the spit.9/10

well what more can i say a great piece. keep it up 9/10

fave line = Step back take seat...my verse even makes your name weak...
SmokaJoka complete...i'd resart ur life with 2 ctr+alt+deletes

it just stood out for me.

COULD YA RETURN THE FAVOUR AND VOTE FAIRLY ON THE BATTLE UNDER MY SIG.THANKS
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