villgepimp
verse was pretty weak, you had sme nice attempts at wordplay, often lacked a little bit, punches were good an bad, no reall killers, strucutre was off, lines were stretched,
which kind of made i boring to read!!!
proof
nice structure, but everything else lacked, your pnches were more like one of those freestyle you just do pissin about, they wernt punches just filler, you attempted a few,
not much wordplay an i can't say your ryhme scheme was the best, you just need to elevate, an keep at it.
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villagepimp
he had punches, wordplay, an proof didn't , both had weak verses though not an enjoyable battle to read, but there can only be one winner!!
plz drop an honest vote on this
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