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A dont like these type of OM...
They seem to me... That they dont belong in here... Its not what a would class as a OM...
You need to work on your structure... Sort out your flow aswell...
Also need to use a wider range of vocabulary... This wasnt very complex at all... Sort that out...
Wasnt feelin this verse at all... As a said... Dont like self-glorification verses... Find them pointless... Played...
Try a interesting topic...
Pz
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