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Old 02-04-04, 10:44 AM   #3
Jen-Aral
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well my vote goes ta flah, and considering he had 10 lines if ya spread em out, DINNIES
he had better rhyme scheme than the other dude...yo, diverse, try rhyming 2 words at the end of ya line...it will up ya verse a lot..
even though diverse had some good concepts, most of em are played...
flash, ya had a nice verse, different style to what ya battled me with but it is ight..


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