potient had some nice bits of imagery and flowed well
very abstract in alot of places and im sure ur the only one who knew what ur talking about
i enjoyed it though
the hook...
not bad the first bar was a bit long but the second half was a nice touch

eddy (< he loves being called that)
i found it really difficult to catch the rhyming in this..
seemed non existent in parts
(maybe its just me..i dunno
content was sound though..feeling that at least
not a bad collab..
but didnt really grip me