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IP:
Liked the flow...
Structure was abit wierd... Maybe the lines are too short... But that is probably what gave you a good flow...
Havent seen anything from you before... For near 3000 posts id of thought it would have been better? Maybe?
It was a nice piece... Nothing really stood out to me though...
Maybe if you didnt seperate the lines... Making 2 lines into 4...
Good concept though... Portrayed nicely...
Pz
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