Here's Lookin At You Kid
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dope....i felt this piece....tiredness....good topic...consistant all the way through...
the structure worked well in this peice....flow was good most of the time...one or two points it seemed off a little....good tho....wordplay was good too....and it was a dope OM ....keep droppin...only your 2nd? good....nice work....
7.5/10.....
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