View Single Post
Old 02-04-04, 11:27 AM   #11
Freeman
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP:

iight...

Wise Ways

You had that one dope personal in your verse...
And having seen that picture... Lol...
You had some decent normal punches... But they didnt hit as hard as you could of made them...
Your structure wasnt as good as normal... Had a decent flow though... Nothing bad about the verse... Jus could of been better... pz


Technician

Your verse was quite good... Had quite a few personals on him... And the rest of your punches hit well...
Had some decent wordplay...
Flow was on... Structure was OK... Not a bad verse... pz

v/ Technician

Had harder punches... More of them... Jus edged it in that overall...


Good battle...

Pz...

OUT