I can't vote because I don't have enough posts, but here's some feedback.

Flow - As far flow Timeless without a doubt was better. It didn't sound forced which I
felt was the case with some of Daffer's lines. It didn't flow as well and was a
little bit harder to read than Timeless's. Many lines were too wordy while others
were too short.

Punches/Personals- Timeless definitly had more creative punches that seemed to hit
alot harder than Daffer's. I liked the diss about Daffer's callout
being one for help and the Lenscrafter line at the end. As for
Daffer, his punches were weak an uninspired. They lacked the
Creativity to really hit hard. Timeless also had a few personals
that i thought were, pretty good. Daffer on the other hand,
should try using more personals, because he really didn't have any.

Creativity- I liked the creativity here by Timeless, nice solid punches , except for the
line about molasses which I feel Is a little played out. Daffer really needs
elevate, not alot of creativity or originality here. Concepts are played out.


To me this wasn't even close. Timeless cleary takes it in every category.
Daffer should work on his punches and personals and use a little bit more
creativity. My vote goes to Timeless.