ightt daffer22 came harder with the hardhittind punches and good structuer
OK the beak down
FLOW:daffer your flow was good but fell off a couple of times but u mad it work,Timeless u need ta elevvate son your still a newB u have time
STRUCTUER:daffter had ightt structuer and time your shit was all over with run ons it was hard ta read
PUNCHES:daFFER u had some OK punches,TIME you had a couple of good ones to but he had more better punches
PERSONALS:i didnt really see any punches from DAFF and time yours was hard ta read cuz of the structuer
MY VOTE
AFFER22
AYO return the favor and hit this battle up real fast so i can get the 3-0 knock out thanx
here's the LiNk
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111881