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Old 02-04-04, 01:23 PM   #44
D.liver.E
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flow- daffer had a better structure so his flow was better, work on it baz
personalz - didn't really see any good personals, both try to add those cuz they can make a big difference in battlez...
metaphors - didn't really saw good metaphors neither, itz a battle, so both need to use more metaphors and personals, thatz what battlin' is all about...
wordplay - same shit, no good wordplay here, u guyz talk hollywood shit insteada battlin' eachother...
wackness - both had a great amount of wackness in their verses, good work on that one...

keep elevatin'...
vote - daffer22