Skills you need to really work on your vocab..you are using words in the wrong context and it is really putting a damper on your verse..it makes it seem like you don't know what your saying...
Mc aines..the structure was weak..but the punchlines were hitting so I gotta give you some props..you handled you buisness with agressive lines..good wordplay..and even had a little flow to it..hard work following it..but it was there...
Vote..McAines..He knew what he was doing....used words that he understood and delivered some good punches.
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