Yeah...this is becoming a pathetic thread..with all the freeposting..any way...
Dope Name..you had a clean structure...easy flow..and some good punches...nothing too extraodinary though...
Venom...your strucure was also good..you had a more complex technique to your drop and you had some decent punches...nothing special either though...

Meta's- Venom..you had the witty meta's..the harvey line..the two dollar bill thing..good.
Wordplay-Dope Name..you had a lot of good multi's infused with good word usage that made a "ring" to your flow...
Punches-Venom..you had punchlines that made you think..while dope name was to the point..I prefer Venom's wit.
Sust-Dope Name..You had a more complete verse with really no filler..just a few weak punches..
Structure-Tie...you had different styles but both were easy to read...
overall...Dope Name...Venom was cool but Dope Name came consistent and had ne filler