Word check it ....this battle was not fair..these two are not on the same level...Lyrical you need to work on uppin your vocab like hardcore.....it serioulsy my guess from that verse would be that your like.....11 or 12......and thats being nice.....you also need to throw punches it is a battle and don't talk about what you gonna do and how good you are.....yoiu nned to make fun of him more....also try using wordplay and meta4's.....
D lIver. e took this hands down he had some Ok punches and he used nice metaphors wordplay and for the most part his verse was original and interesting.........hit this up y'all if you can vote peace.......
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