Okay

Flow=Daz, his flowed a bit better over all, it was easier to read which I like in a battle. RB, it seemed that some of your lines were a bit forced.

Punches=Daz, I like his punches more, he had some funny shit in there and I think that funny punches are always good. RB, the punches that you did throw seemed kind of weak to me, you should work on that, it'll make your over all verse better.

Personals=Dav, I have to give this to him as well, his personals were just a bit better. RB, if you had just one or two more personals or just better personals over all I would have given this to you, but it didn't seem like you really attempted any personals exept for that one.

Vocab=Daz, he had a higher level of vocab in his verse. RB, you had some vocab in there, but for the most part it was pretty basic vocab.

Over all=Daz, you had a pretty nice drop, I like your punches, comedy is a good way to go with those, I think that you should work on personals, you put in some but they just weren't up to as high a level as they could have been. Other than that nice drop and keep it up.
RB, You should work a bit on your punches, you had some punches they just didn't hit to hard, and you should work on personals as well, personals are a good tool to have in a battle, You had an okay flow even if stuff sounded a little forced sometimes, and okay vocab, but you should work on those two areas as well, but it was an okay drop, keep working at it and you should improve.

Vote=Daz

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