ok this was a good topical i do topical myself i'll break it down like this.......You both had very little imagery which is the key to winning a topical if you can get a person to picture in your mind what your saying they gonna feel you a whole lot more....Vocab definitly lacking on sydinals verse you said alot but it was all very simplistic when you get right down to it....It really wasn't anything that hasn't been said before...it wasn't thoughtful i made me think very little....Lots of people struggle and wanna be good MC's why should i care about you?...i think you went too much for quanitiy and not for quiality..........Diverse....You have fine multis...a lil bit deeper thought than your oppenent i see where your coming from most of the time but work on putting emotion into everyline you write ....If you do that your peotic topicals will skyrocket as far as elevation goes.....also writing abstract like you do is difficult you should really try to write topics that people can relate too....If you wanna make it hard on yourself.....though be my guest....hehe i look forward to a rematch......pz....
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