Brain - your verse was really hard to read....your structure was horrible and i couldnt tell where they line ended and started..break your verse down like HH did....you had no good punches really...i couldnt catch ya flow, and i didnt see any metas or wordplay...no personals either, just 1 tiny personal that failed. try to work on ya punches and struct..get the base of those down then u can add in metas wordplay and personals.

hard - your verse wasnt much better then brains...your structure was just ok and your flow was very choppy..your lines never stayed the same length...your punches were basic and played..and alot of them didnt hit...the rhyme scheme wasnt good, you rhymed the same sound alot... wordplay...i saw alittle of it and personals...well those were poor...but u did take this battle

V/ Hard...he actually threw acouple ok punches and had some wordplay

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