This Was Ok Man. . Topic Is Good, Content Was Ok, But Like Everyone Is Sayin', For Part Two Have Alot More Feeling And Express The Topic More Through Words Than You Did With This Part. . Multi's Were Good Tho And They Helped The Flow. . Vocab Was Average. . SO The Only Thing You Need To Worry About Is Emotion. . I'lL Check For Part Two When It's Up. . Pz.

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