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An accountant and an artist, neither one makes any cents...
Cuz Bio can't draw on intellect and is doomed ta lose his balance.
Sayin he loves his instrument, and he loves it so much it's sick...
Cuz when he says his interest is his pencil, he means his pencil dick.
Bio a sane scientist? That thought alone is a crazy notion...
Cuz if this kid was really in a lab, he'd just invent a better hand lotion.
And despite that, his feminine side overpowers, he's a pussy up front...
Cuz when I spun him round and kicked that ass, I lost my foot in cunt.
Then he went and wished me Godspeed, but it's Bio that died today...
But even the Creator hates ya rhymes, so you'll be going the other way.
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aihgt this was coll,had good creativity,and personals were inflicted much more appropriete and such,nice flow and werdplay was good and well overall good battle verse i`d say 9/10 so yea nice job yo keep that shit up and yea merk fools and shit
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Mr. Born is Hideous Come on he didn't Show a Facial Pic
When He came from his Moms Womb her last dieing wrds
were "damn u were" -Born To Kill- a b*tch...
Decision to battle me..Puts U and Ur record in Double Jeapordy
Because I kill with Warfare By-Ologicaly..Ur avatar shows Ur skull
openings for messing with My Chemistry...
U beating me?? please...Lock Ur Fingers In chains and even if U
Manage to break loose U still couldn't text Frees...I punish with
Ease, when U hit The X on I.M ciphers is.....
The only time you Aim To please..U spec of a Vet, Just another Herb
From Houston Claiming He can -Tex-..Even if U did typing while nuttin
on ur words U still wouldn't be a -Textceeds-
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aight well i felt that ya struc was off messed up ya flow a bit
but overall i would say that the verse was prety good and ya shit was straight
although ya personals was kinda misdirected in a sense and ya punches was ok
but i would say you did ok but you lacked some wittyness i beleive but 7/10
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yo born2kill hit up one of my battles in my siggy ok man,peace out everyone
vote/born2kill
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