lyricaly - ya verse was pretty basic..it was filled it played lines and none direct punches..ya flow was choppy and wasnt consistent...wordplay - none was there and metas - none again... personals - blah... and punches overall - nope...ya punches werent hard hitting...try to include those things that u didtn have into them

illtalic - ya verse wasnt bad...ya stayed smooth through ya whole verse wit ya flow..structure was right on target and was perfect...ya had some decent and good punches in there...varied through out....ya personals were decent and they did hit him, they werent bad....overall you had a decent verse

V/ Ill...he came harder wit punches and personals and an overall harder hitting verse

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