ok

this battle wasnt that good both came wak with structure and
flow werk on them unknown your shit was way to basic,
no hard punches atall......you gota hit hard man,
shit consistency man soz but it wasnt hard atall...you had a better structure but,
aiunes wak structure atleast tho you made an attemp of a punch and had,
some personals in there not a bad verse man,
v-aines,

plz hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...528#post1156528 thx.......pz

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