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Old 02-04-04, 06:03 PM   #16
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Skillz - Ya verse was hard to understand..the struct was set up like a openmic. ya punches - well they just werent there, ya had no good ones at all...include metas and personals in them to make em better..wordplay can help alot too. none of ya punches connected with Aines and didnt hit him....only thing u can do is take a trip to WEC and keep battlin and elevating...go read some battles in the LLL too..that'll show u what a good verse looks like

mc aines.. ya struct was straight wack...i mean wack...every single line u spit was stretched to hell...every one took up 2 lines, i coulda cut ya lines in half and made a bar outa one...also..ya dont need to use CAPS IN YA PUNCHES... we get them and u dont need to point them out...same wit the """" around them...they werent bad though...ya had some decent and good ones cuz u used metas and wordplay....thats basically why u took this battle

V/ MC Aines
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