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RB's Farther
Don't try to defend it, I always rear end kids..
I'd love you to merk my ass, but this aint tennis
pretty weak, 4/10

Your text sounds depressed *sigh* it wont last
Cuz RB.com's Father will *sigh*bur son your ass!
u seem to like ass, but u aint creative with it, 5/10

This battle is your end, I straight a-vent fools...
Even your crew will V.O.T. ... E against you!
lol, made me laff a lil, 6/10

You'd try flip my WORDPLAY concepts, thaz word
But sadly only reduce it to fucking PLAYEDWORDS!
not too bad, 6/10

Ya name sound gangsta in english, but start 'fessin..
But like ya life....
It only says 'thats after' in a dutch accent!
pretty weak, nice attempt, 5/10

Feed YOUR verse?, I'll tell you something blatent
I'd feed off your career and still die of starvation
lol, could of be worded better, 6/10

Fuck this battle, I could win with a no show...
You are a good head...with those fucking lowblows
blah, pretty weak 5/10

wordplay let u down, elevate, i thought u was a vet on an alias,

overall 37/70

dazasta
There's no point in me trying...you'd probably win..sike..
the father?..i must be great grandaddy..chuz i just sonned you twice..
not too strong, bad wording, 5/10

i guess it wasnt right...to try and show you up...
and of course you declare illness...your verse had me throwing up...
lol, nice 7/10

i know its tough...to try to get the hang dude...
but ur in desperate need of elevation..just like...fallen angels...
didn't even ryhme, 4/10

its the same dude..who tries to defend his cause...
sorry to tell you dad..your late..like menopause...
pretty played, 5/10

to prevent your fall...skill?..is what you lack...
proven fag...gives handjobs when i tell him to hit the sack..
lol, not too bad, 6/10

just quit rap...toss you like a used pencil...
loyalty to you? shit even se7en didnt defend you...
lol, nice 7/10

guess i'll end you..shame i shoulda went first..
then you'd have a chance to win...if you quoted my whole verse...
hmmm, im sure i seen that last line somewere before, 6/10

overall 40/70

again bad wording, an weak punches, made ur verse weak

my vote dazasta