Nice concept .. A little repetitive at times .. But still nice concept .. Easy to follow .. I think U should go back over and try to put more emotion into it tho .. I think U can make it better .. But for wat it was it was pretty nice ..


Sayin I'm white cuz it ain't only slang dat I say
and rap ain't the only thing my stereo plays


Heh .. I liked that part .. Keep writin' man .. One