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Weezy- Try to avoid using the "/". Ur punches didn't hit hard at all. It was like two set ups in each bar. Ur only decent line was the "THING" line, where you attempted wordplay and a personal. Try 2 incoorparate thos things into every line.
Thing- Ur verse was decent. It had its moments, the beginner I wasn't feeling at all, definately a filler. I liked the soil line a lot, showed nice wrodplay there. You went for a lot of witty punches, but sometimes it was almost forced. You had good flow though and decent vocab. Good drop.
Overall, Thing took this for the reasons above. Sry I can't poll, but can u drop an honest vote on my battle vs K. Much appreciated. peaceee.
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Ur not wack................ I'm just better
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reppin strong, wurdshizle
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