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Originally Posted by MeNTiLL
Weird .. But dope .. Last line got me lost .. But the rest were sicc .. Especially the first line of the last stanza .. Dopeness .. Was expectiin' somethin' completely diff. cuz of the title .. But none the less this was dope also .. I hate U cuz I couldn't highlight my quotables cuz U put it as an image so that's why there isn't any in my reply .. LoL .. Keep writin' man .. One
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Hahaha. Thanks Mentill. .Gif is a file type of an image by the way.
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Originally Posted by Maven
WHAT
WHAT
WHAT WHAT WHAT
touch me....I mean....oh my god scribe.
this made a ridiculous amount of sense to me....was it supposed to?
I don't know, but I really enjoyed it.
it had this weird flow to it, that didn't flow at all, but it didn't seem chopped up either.
if this verse was a woman I would rape her.
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Thanks Mave
This does have a lot of actual heart felt truths and all. I have a couple different styles of writing, I mixed them together this time.
Thanks again man.