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Old 02-04-04, 09:31 PM   #17
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Punches: Black, had some pretty dope punches, Baz, you take the cup for worst verse ever. Seriously. Not to sound like Simon, but you fucking suck. Learn English, there is no hope of elevation from you. The hitting the street line was pretty dope.
Wordplay: Neither, wasn't any wordplay.
Multis: Black used a few multi syllables, maybe 2's and 3's, good, nothing from Baz.
Personals: Neither, neither had any personals, nobody knows nobody.
Opener: Black, actual verse from Black.
Closer: Black, again, a real verse.

Baz, a punch is a comparison, compare two different things, try using a quote or phrase you mmight make something original.

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