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Old 02-04-04, 09:39 PM   #23
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Ok. . .

ill, im seaking to kill,u floppin still,u call u heat but all u send is a chill/
u a rapper ur a face-for-bags,u a mc u trully a disgrace-to-stages/
this a race-for-ages,u rhymes from a book, just whered u place-the-pages
^^^^ Flow Is Off, Horrible Attempts At Punches, Disgrace To Stages Is Played, So Is The Place The Pages Line. .
recycling, your garbage YOU-SPREAD,u spit at me, then y the fuck r YOU-DEAD/
u fall in the polls like "H-DEAN", im a myth but ur SPITs the thing rlly AINT-SEEN/
^^^^First Line Was Weak, So Was The 2nd Line. . Your Structure Is Horrid. . First Line Didn't Make Sense Either. . Where's The Strong Shit At ?
ILL-in-tear, myth comes hes still-in-fear, like ur reputation, i KILL-n-CLEAR
change-directions,rearrange your-intenstines,u a mc, and ur still ASKING-4-QUESTIONS/
^^^^First Line Sucked, Straight Up. . I'm Being Brutally Honest. . The Second Line Was Below Average At Best And The Asking 4 Questions Part Still Wasn't A Punch.
2-wrong, definetly not u thats 2-strong, u think u can beat me wit ur blues-song/
^^^^Ok. . Best Atempt At A Punch So Far. .

FINISHER*

HEY, UNATIC, call u herb static, way wack sticks-2-u,call u a HO, the way dicks-go-2-u/
comin out of retirment,just 2 cant sent back 2 the WACK-PLACE,ill trace BACK-2-UR-DISGRACE, wit
lines like that, ur the sweet-victory w.o the TRUE-TASTE (think bout it)
^^^^True Taste Line Is Played. . Still No Good PUnches Man. . What The Fuck Happened. . You Leave The PUnches In Your Mind ? Bad Verse, No Flow, Structure, Or Punches.


Ya flows an embarassment and ya mainly battle newbies
Restricted to MythikuL...wait.. Restricted Who? who's he
^^^^Flow And Structure ! I've Been Looking For These Things, Good Punch To Open Up.
Unheard of member, who's been registerd since June of 03
Oh G, i basically insult myself when callin you my homie
^^^^Multi's. . Flow. . Decent Punch. . You're Already Beatin' Him 2 Punches To 0
You think your 3rd return makes you rememberable to RB
Hardly... even if ya spit razor punches, ya still couldn't harm me
^^^^Razor Punches Played. . But Still A Decent Punch. .
Ya better wish theres life afta death, cuz your death is near
MythikuL stepped in fear, already knowin.... The End Is Here
^^^Multi's And Flow Again. . Strong. . Punch Was Below Average Tho
Shit betta get Mohammad Ali ta throw ya punches, for help
Flow like a buttafly sting like a bee?? Fuck it.. He's just been delt
^^^^Nice Closer, Tho Played As Fuck. . I Said Shit Similar To That 2 Years Ago. . Decent Enough.

Goddamn, I Actually Broke A Battle Down. . Overall. .

Battles = Punches . . So. . . Vote = ILLunatic. Pz.
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